作文是在学习中很是重要的一种实用型文体,优秀的作文不在于字数篇幅的长短,而在于文章的立意是否深刻,小编今天就为您带来了英语中考作文8篇,相信一定会对你有所帮助。
题目:请向你未见面的笔友写一封自我介绍信,字数不少于60单词。
dear bob,
亲爱的鲍勃,
yesterday i heard from you. i am very glad to be your pen friend. my name is peter zhang. i am sixteen years old. i live in...
昨天我收到了你的来信,我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁,我住在......
i am a middle school student, too. i like english and maths very much. i also like sports. i am good at singing. i know a little about america. could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
我也是一名中学生,我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动,我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多,下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗?
please write to me soon.
期待着你的来信。
yours
你的
peter zhang
点评:回信简洁明了,句子间的衔接自然、紧凑,文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍,达到了回信的目的。
面对英语作文,很多学生都表示头疼,自己觉得写的还比较理想,成绩却不理想,有些同学不顾得分要点,一味追求难的'语法及高级的词汇,结果导致错误不 断,本末倒置,不但没有拿到得分亮点,反而扣分,这是由于大部分同学对英语作文打分规则不太清楚导致。今天特级教师帮大家理一下英语作文的得分要 点,以助于大家能够拿到一个好的分数。
同学们首先要知道,英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。以下教大家四点如何拿到英语高分作文:
1.把握要点:
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
2.理清结构
中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清 晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 xq is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,he has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,he does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,how strong and robust xq is! i hope to be him one day!
twenty years later, i have been working adult, one day, when i was at work, all of a sudden, one smells like disgusting in the not far from the "waste collection".
i insist on for a while, but eventually can't bear the blow of the smelly smell. wanted to know, i went "garbage collection". i see, the environment here makes me dumbfounded. "day!" i shouted. the environment here is worse than i expected: the garbage cans, lunch box, the land of mountains. all sorts of color plastic bags flying, branches, grass everywhere, it can be seen to be seen. see this scene, i was surprised, for the environmental pollution and disappointment for those who litter at random.
the human damage to the marine world also, faint suddenly became dark deep blue sea water. sea fish, shrimp are also quietly disappeared. and the pain of sounds from a distance of "fish kill factory" gushed out. atop the, i saw several young man armed with a sword, there are several person of great strength with tenacity matchless sword. asked a blue whale to head weighs one hundred and eighty thousand kg. the blue whale struggled desperately, want to get rid of the clutches of the human race. although it again how to swing his big frame, also hard to escape the clutches. for a moment, the blue whale head, slowly and in a pool of blood, it forever left the world.
初三中考在即。师生的复习应该进入一个非常专题化的时期。如何写好一篇60字的作文,争取18分的最大值,显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。原因很明显,本年度是中考有史以来作文分值最高的一年,要求也是最高、最细的一年,所以分差增大,原来最多不差三四分的作文,弄不好很可能差十分以上,十分!对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字练。目标有了,最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。
60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。
60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分这样五个层次:
1)开始句2)向主体过度句 3)主体叙述 4)向结尾过度 5)结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的.梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右 (每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整),最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。
我热爱地球,热爱我们赖以生存的家园。爱她的青山绿水,爱她的碧草蓝天……
i love the earth, love for our homeland. love her beautiful country scene, love her green to the sky......
在四野飘香的花丛中,我和蝶儿一起嬉戏、欢笑;在郁郁葱葱的森林里,我与小鸟一起追逐、歌唱;清晨,我迈着轻盈的.步履去原野上踏青,雾霭缭绕着、白纱般的柔柔地漂浮在空中。吮吸着花草的芳香,欣享着阳光的沐浴,我被陶醉在这如痴如醉的梦幻里;夜晚,我坐在稻谷飘香的农家小院里,仰望着璀璨的星空,聆听着蝉鸣嘹响,蛙声如潮,仿佛置身于一个童话般的王国。
in the fields the fragrance of flowers, butterflies, and i play together in laughter; a wild profusion of vegetation in the forest, i chase, with birds singing; early in the morning, i walked with light steps to the fields on the outing, mist shrouded with white veil, gently floating in the air. at the scent of flowers and plants, we enjoy the sun bath, i was intoxicated in the dream of the night, delude one to folly; i sat in the fragrance of rice farmers in a small courtyard, looking up at the bright sky, listening to the sound of cicadas liao ring, frog sound waves, like being in a fairy tale kingdom.
多么好的环境啊!怎能容许被破坏呢?
very good environment! that would allow the destroyed?
人类的高科技,大排放,无止地开采……恐龙因环境而灭绝,而人类却要把自己毁灭掉吗?
the high-tech, high emissions, the endless exploitation...... the dinosaur extinction due to the environment, human have to destroy ourselves?
保护环境与维护生态平衡的历史重任要落到我们跨世纪一代的肩上。让我们都来关爱自然,热爱地球吧,手挽手、肩并肩、心连心地铸起一道绿色环保的大堤,捍卫资源、捍卫环境、捍卫地球、捍卫我们美好的家园吧!
the historical responsibility protect environment and maintaining ecological balance to fall on our cross century generation shoulder. let us all come to love nature, love the earth, hand in hand, shoulder to shoulder, heart to heart to set up a green dam, defend, defend, defend the earth resources and environment, protect our beautiful homeland!
假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
dear xiaowei,
weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. so i don’t think you have much to worry about. here are my suggestions. eating late at night is ok, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.
also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. running is great. you don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? or you can do some team sports like basketball. i’m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. i hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. “believe myself, and i will win.” it’s really important for us when we meet difficulties. don’t lose heart; i’m sure you will succeed one day.
who do not want to make their home better, more beautiful? however, with the development of science and technology, a variety of living garbage more and more, most of which are garbage will cause environmental pollution. for example, we used the battery, if not used after the appropriate treatment, it will cause great environmental pollution. according to the study, a waste button battery can make 600,000 liters of water can not drink. if each person drops a waste battery, then to that time, the water will become a luxury.
so, in order to protect the environment, please sort the garbage.
china in june 1, 20xx from the implementation of the "plastic limit order", this approach, so that our annual savings of 37 million barrels of oil. plastic bags, this kind of thing for ordinary families, but ordinary, but you know, plastic bags are a major factor in polluting the environment. plastic bags to oil as raw materials, not only consume a lot of resources, but also need 500 years to be natural decomposition.
therefore, in order to protect the environment, please reduce the use of plastic bags.
the recent global climate change conference in copenhagen has once again sounded the alarm. although the final failed to achieve the desired effect, but if we did not do so, then open the meeting is only useless. the meeting said that the current global average temperature is gradually rising, most of the iceberg has begun to melt. if this goes on again, then the world will be flooded. the current global average temperature has risen 1.1 ℃ than before, do not look just a small 1.1 ℃, but this is the "global average temperature" ah! if the global average temperature rises 4 ℃, then the arctic and antarctic temperatures will rise 16 ℃, then the arctic and antarctica can also see the trees. do you think, what time will the world be?
in fact, the culprit that led to these disasters is our humanity. according to the study, we use electrical appliances or other things every day will emit large amounts of carbon dioxide, and carbon dioxide is a major factor in the temperature rise. if you reduce the use of electrical appliances, then the carbon dioxide emissions will be reduced. car exhaust also contains a lot of carbon dioxide, should always remind father and mother to work or travel, should take the subway or bus, as much as possible to open a private car, this can reduce a lot of carbon dioxide emissions.
therefore, in order to protect the environment, please reduce the use of electrical appliances, less open car to work or travel.
as the owner of society, to improve the global environment, is our bounden duty and obligation. if everyone in the world environmental protection, environmental protection every day, you can create a new, beautiful world!
1、岁月无情;岁月易逝;岁月不待人。
years of relentless years goes way;
2、在我个人看来,做比做更明智。
in my opinion, it is more sensible to do it.
3、没有证据表明。
there is no evidence to show that.
4、知识之于精神,一如健康之于..。
knowledge is to the mind what health is to the body.
5、潮涨必有潮落时。
when the tide rises, there must be a ebb.
6、毫无疑问,对问题应予以足够的重视。
there is no doubt that enough attention should be paid to the problem.
7、快乐时光去如飞。
happy time to fly.
8、有热情而物质时犹如有火焰而无光芒。
when there is passion and substance, it is like a flame without light.
9、事业在先,享乐在后。
business first, pleasure in the post.
10、随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为。
with the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that.
11、一个今天胜似两个明天。
one today is worth two tomorrow.
12、圣诞一年只一度。
christmas is only once a year.
13、首次做不好,必须重新搞。
for the first time, you must do it again.
14、人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题。
people have figured out many ways to solve this problem.
15、熟练来自经验。
proficiency from experience.
16、忽视职业便是放弃职业。
to ignore the job is to give up the job.
17、由经验而得的智慧,胜于学习而得的智慧;一次亲身的体会,胜过两次的教师教导。
wisdom which is learned from experience is better than learning; a personal experience is more than two times of teacher education.
18、光阴一去不复返。
time is gone forever.
19、解决这些麻烦的最好办法是。
the best way to solve this problem is.
20、知识就是力量。
knowledge is power.
21、人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
attitudes towards drug abuse vary from person to person.
22、该是采纳的建议,并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
it is time to take the advice and give special attention to the progress.
23、神决定了谁是你的亲戚,幸运的是在选择朋友方面他给了你留了余地。
god determines who is your relative, and fortunately he gives you a choice in choosing a friend.
24、就某事而言。
as far as something is concerned.
25、不要为十全十美担心,你永远作不到十全十美。
don't worry about perfection, you'll never be perfect.
26、今日事须今日毕,切勿拖延到明天。
today, things must be done today, do not delay until tomorrow.
27、毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
there is no doubt that job hopping has its drawbacks as well as merits.
28、很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险。
obviously, if we don't control the problem, it is very likely that we will be in danger.
29、切莫依赖明天。
tomorrow never comes.
30、这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。
this issue has attracted wide attention.
31、没有比接受教育更重要的事。
nothing is more important than to receive education.
32、行动是知识之佳果。
action is the fruit of knowledge.
33、只有这样,我们才能。
only in this way can we.
34、关于,人们的观点大不相同。
people's opinions differ greatly on people's opinions.
35、有经验而无学问,胜于有学问而无经验。
experience without learning is better than learning without experience.
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